Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Outline Structure

I. Introduction
A. Slumes are all over ther world and are growing.
B. A slum is a densely populated urban area which is characterized by a generally low standard of living. Slums may also be known as shantytowns, barrios, ghettos, or favelas, although some of these terms have specific cultural meanings.
C. Slums are a world epidemic because they are extremely over-crowded, leading to poor health care and high crime rates.
D. Slums are very populated because thats is were poor people can afford to live.

II. Defendable Point #1
A. Slums are so populated that the goverment does even know the acceracy of how many people live in slums.
B. The largest slum is in Africa in city called Kibera
i.  "its true population isn't know"
ii. That is how big and crowded that slum is, to a point were the population isn't even known.
C. Kibera in Africa has the bigest slum and the population density isn't even know because of all the people living there.
D. The people who live in slums have very low health care.

III. Defendable Point #2
A. People who are living in slums their health care system is very low.
B. Due to this, it shortness their life span dramticly.
i. "water people drink and contaminates the food they eat"
ii. Dirty water, low food supply and many diseases are only just a few resons wh people who in habit the slums die and have short life spands.
C. The people who in habit slums are not caplable of getting the resources needed to treat their illnesses.
D. Since slums have low health care and a big population this spikes up the crime rateing.

IV. Defendable Point #3
A. In slums there is crime everywhere, they have what you call "slim lords."
B. In slums they have crime familys bascally.
i. "squatters or slum lords put up shcks on land to develope illegal sttlements"
ii. All of these criminal acts lead to a boost of the criminal vilonce in slums.
C. So much criminal acts are done in slums that it is hard for the police to keep up or they are in the slum lords pay roll and let these things slide.
D. High population density, high crime rating, and low health care lead to unsafe and deathly slum conditions.

V. Conclusion
A. Slums are a big issue due to the unsafe living conditions the people of the slums face.
B. Slums are a world epidemic because they are extremely over-crowded, leading to poor health care and high crime rates.
C. Low  health care and high population density and criminal activitys are why slums are filthy and an unsafe enviorment for the general public.
D. Slums are just getting worse and worse, what do you think they would me days, months and years from now. That is something everyone should think about.

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